This blog accompanies ENG 207; Beginner’s Workshop in Imaginative Writing: Creative Writing in Digital Spaces at the University of Kentucky. This course is a creative writing workshop and course that explores creative composition and literary arts in digital spaces. This course will introduce or reintroduce students to the intersections of technology and literature by surveying literature and creative expression in digital spaces.
Wednesday, February 5, 2014
Modified ID Box Comments
Please leave your comments pertaining to the Modified ID Box Assignments here.
i love how complex the outside collage is compared to the inside of the cd case. The only thing i would say that i was confused about is i dont really see how the outside of the cd is how people see you. it seems like it should be on the inside or part of your personality.
I think that you done a great job about telling the way people see you on the inside and how you used the quotes and photos on the outside to tell how you feel or feel that other people view about you. You broke your case today on your way to class. The back side of your case is very interesting you collage portrays that you are an artistic person, and that you believe in art. i think you done a great job.
Critique 1. inside cover not fitting into cd case (falling out) 2.Very creative, and catchy cover 3.Inside tells the subtle things about you, like your shy and sensitive and you enjoy shopping
I really liked the ID box I got to critique, and found it hard to find things that could have been improved.
Things I liked: I'm a cat person, so I enjoyed all the cats everywhere inside and out, and liked the combination of interests represented by the Castiel cuddling kittens cartoon on the front cover! I liked the cohesive color used on the outside and the inside of the case, it brought things together as a whole, and I thought the composition of the pictures and arrangement both inside and out was aesthetically pleasing. The composition didn't look random but was well planned out. I thought art styles were evocative of an overall feeling that seemed to be indicative of interests and personality. I particularly liked the cat with text inside it--it made me think of the grand tradition of writers who are cat people (H.P. Lovecraft, Neil Gaiman, Mark Twain, etc), and how often cats show up in literature.
Critiques:
I had a hard time coming up with things. But what I have written down from class, is that the space on the back and inside back could have been larger in order to fill the whole space, and some of the pictures were a bit blurry (I had this problem too, and I'm not sure why photoshop did that to them...) I think maybe some more personal pictures? I mainly got an impression of interests and less of personality other than interests. I think maybe the font used for the text and your name could be a little less plain, perhaps more evocative in font and color? And this last one I'm not sure if it's a critique or not really-- the inside and outside had very similar feels and impressions. I don't know if this is a critique because it's entirely possible that you're the type of person who's pretty open and doesn't hold much back. So if you're a what you see is what you get type, then that is reflected in the project.
i love how complex the outside collage is compared to the inside of the cd case. The only thing i would say that i was confused about is i dont really see how the outside of the cd is how people see you. it seems like it should be on the inside or part of your personality.
ReplyDeleteI think that you done a great job about telling the way people see you on the inside and how you used the quotes and photos on the outside to tell how you feel or feel that other people view about you. You broke your case today on your way to class. The back side of your case is very interesting you collage portrays that you are an artistic person, and that you believe in art. i think you done a great job.
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ReplyDelete1. inside cover not fitting into cd case (falling out)
2.Very creative, and catchy cover
3.Inside tells the subtle things about you, like your shy and sensitive and you enjoy shopping
I really liked the ID box I got to critique, and found it hard to find things that could have been improved.
ReplyDeleteThings I liked:
I'm a cat person, so I enjoyed all the cats everywhere inside and out, and liked the combination of interests represented by the Castiel cuddling kittens cartoon on the front cover! I liked the cohesive color used on the outside and the inside of the case, it brought things together as a whole, and I thought the composition of the pictures and arrangement both inside and out was aesthetically pleasing. The composition didn't look random but was well planned out. I thought art styles were evocative of an overall feeling that seemed to be indicative of interests and personality. I particularly liked the cat with text inside it--it made me think of the grand tradition of writers who are cat people (H.P. Lovecraft, Neil Gaiman, Mark Twain, etc), and how often cats show up in literature.
Critiques:
I had a hard time coming up with things. But what I have written down from class, is that the space on the back and inside back could have been larger in order to fill the whole space, and some of the pictures were a bit blurry (I had this problem too, and I'm not sure why photoshop did that to them...) I think maybe some more personal pictures? I mainly got an impression of interests and less of personality other than interests. I think maybe the font used for the text and your name could be a little less plain, perhaps more evocative in font and color? And this last one I'm not sure if it's a critique or not really-- the inside and outside had very similar feels and impressions. I don't know if this is a critique because it's entirely possible that you're the type of person who's pretty open and doesn't hold much back. So if you're a what you see is what you get type, then that is reflected in the project.
I really liked your box :)